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My Family

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I don't know much about my parents, like what they were doing before I was born. If my memory is correct, my parents were in America, where I was born. They lived in a mansion, and were really goo...

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My Family

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I have four people in my family including my father, my mother, my little brother, and me. First, I will talk about my father. My father is very nice and he works at my grandfather's place. He has ...

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My Family

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My family is made of four people including my sister, my mother, my father and me. My sister is eight years old. She is quite shy in front of people, especially when she is not fond of them. But ...

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My Family

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In my family, there are four people and two dogs. I am eighteen. l am studying to enter the university. I want to major dancing because I want to be a ballet dancer. First, my father is tall and s...

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A- Describe This Picture #1

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The picture shows a peaceful lake shore, and a lot of people are visiting. There are not many children here, and the number of older people in the picture lead me to believe that it is a weekday....

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My Family

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My name is Rikuto Furuno. I would like to introduce my family. I have a younger brother. First I will introduce about my father. My father is an engineer. My father is always doing a lot of work ti...

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A- My Room

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I like my room quite a bit. There are a lot of things that I enjoy my room.First of all, I have many books. I like many genres of books, like mystery and science fiction. This is the reason why I ...

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My Room

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My room is not actually my room, but instead it is a big is very big room I share with my family. In the room, I have my table where I study and read books. I have some small shelves that are co...

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My Room

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In my house, I don't really have my own room, however, I have my own area. My area is in the family's bedroom, where my mother, sister, brother, and I sleep every night. I usually study and do my ...

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B Attending University

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People attend college or university for many different reasons. But, I think that people attend them for three main reasons. First of all, they want to continue with education and attain a high...

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My Family

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I don't know much about my parents, like what they were doing before I was born. If my memory is correct, my parents were in America, where I was born. They lived in a mansion, and were really goo...

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My Family

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I have four people in my family including my father, my mother, my little brother, and me. First, I will talk about my father. My father is very nice and he works at my grandfather's place. He has ...

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My Family

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My family is made of four people including my sister, my mother, my father and me. My sister is eight years old. She is quite shy in front of people, especially when she is not fond of them. But ...

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My Family

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In my family, there are four people and two dogs. I am eighteen. l am studying to enter the university. I want to major dancing because I want to be a ballet dancer. First, my father is tall and s...

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A- Describe This Picture #1

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The picture shows a peaceful lake shore, and a lot of people are visiting. There are not many children here, and the number of older people in the picture lead me to believe that it is a weekday....

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My Family

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My name is Rikuto Furuno. I would like to introduce my family. I have a younger brother. First I will introduce about my father. My father is an engineer. My father is always doing a lot of work ti...

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A- My Room

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I like my room quite a bit. There are a lot of things that I enjoy my room.First of all, I have many books. I like many genres of books, like mystery and science fiction. This is the reason why I ...

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My Room

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My room is not actually my room, but instead it is a big is very big room I share with my family. In the room, I have my table where I study and read books. I have some small shelves that are co...

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My Room

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In my house, I don't really have my own room, however, I have my own area. My area is in the family's bedroom, where my mother, sister, brother, and I sleep every night. I usually study and do my ...

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Outside Activities

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When I was in preschool, I started to go to a English school called Marey which was like an international school for the weekend. Back then I was attending Japanese school so this class really he...

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A- My Favorite Movie

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I love watching movies, not only borrowing and renting it but also going to the theater or cinema to watch movies. For explaining how much I love, I have got almost one hundreds of movies in total...

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A The Best Book!

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I presume that there are exactly two distinct types of people, those who like to read and those who don't. I am the one who is reluctant to read books. I don't think it will count as a book categor...

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A- Hobbies

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My hobby is listening to music and I often listening to music for free time. Listen to music can reduce our stress. As a result, it is very important thing for us.I like many kinds of genre of musi...

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A The Best Book!

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My favorite book is "Moeyo Ken" by Ryotaro Siba. He wrote many books on Japanese historical figures. The main character in "Moeyo Ken", is Tosizou Hijikata. He was a deputy of the Shinsengumi, whic...

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Favorite School Activities

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My favorite school activity is the sports festival. I have two reasons for that.First, it allows me to bond with my classmates. Usually, other schools practice for the sports festival for more tha...

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A Favorite School Activities

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My favorite school activity is the sports festival. I have two reasons for that. First, it is held in early June every year. Usually, other schools practice for the sports festival more than a wee...

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A- The Best Book!

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I presume that there are exactly two distinct types of people, those who like to read and those who don't. I am the one who is reluctant to read books. I don't think it will count as a book categor...

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The Best Book!

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My favorite books are part of the Warriors series. Almost 20 books have been published in the series. Just by seeing this title, I believe most people would presume a story of people fighting in w...

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A- The Best Book!

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My favorite books are the part of The Warriors series. Almost 20 books have been published in the series. Just by seeing this title, I believe most people would presume a story of people fighting ...

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A- Favorite School Activities

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My favorite school activity is sports festival. I have two reasons for that. At first, it is held early June every year. Students cannot practice for school festival only a week. It is too short. ...

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B Attending University

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People attend college or university for many different reasons. But, I think that people attend them for three main reasons. First of all, they want to continue with education and attain a high...

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Agree/Disagree: Parents as Teachers

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There are some things in life which are best learned from parents, such as manners and the foundations of living life well. But as of my age right now, there aren't many things that I can learn ...

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A- Agree/Disagree: Parents as Teachers

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I disagree with the statement, "parents are the best teachers." There are some aspects in life in which are best learned from parents such as manner and things that would be the foundations of li...

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Book Smarts vs. Street Smarts

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I agree with the statement, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Things learned from books have many indirect effects on a career. But most things that can be directly used in ...

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A- Book Smarts vs. Street Smarts

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I agree with the statement, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Things learned from books have many indirect major effects on career. But most things that can be directly used...

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Agree/Disagree: Responsibilities

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I do agree with the statement, "sometimes people should do things that they do not enjoy doing." However, that is only because the word "sometimes" is included in the statement. There are some si...

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A- Agree/Disagree: Responsibilities

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I do agree with the statement, "sometimes people should do things that they do not enjoy doing." However, that is only because the word "sometimes" is included in the statement. There are some si...

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Museums

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When I visit some local museums in my hometown, it seems that the number of tourists who visit is increasing, as we have got growing number of tourists from around the world these days. This means ...

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Small Town vs. Big City

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There are only two types of people on this planet. People who prefer to live in a small town and people who prefer to live in a big city. I prefer to live in a small town because I am used to liv...

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A- Small Town vs. Big City

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There are only two types of people on this planet. People who prefer to live in a small town and people who prefer to live in a big city. I prefer to live in a small town. First of all, I have b...

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