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Family Fun

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I have two activities that I like to do with my family.First, I like playing video game such as Wii and competing whose win. Especially, my favorite game is Mario Karts. The rules of the game is ju...

Last Weekend

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Last weekend I went to Tenjin to play with my friend. We gathered there at half past three so, it was a little late but we didn't mind. First, we took some pictures by using a phone application cal...

My Mornings

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My morning is busy and it often starts at 6:30am. My mother always makes my breakfast and lunch and wakes me up. I always eat and study for my school's morning test then leave home at 7:10. M...

My Room

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I like simple one, so my room has many white things : Walls, my desk, my chest, and my bed.And on my desk, there are only textbooks,a light, and some photos I took with my basketball club's member....

Let Me Introduce Myself...

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Hello! My name is Yuka Hara. I'm 16 years old and I have a little sister. I love my family.In middle school, I belonged to the basketball club. But there wasn't one in my high school, so I now belo...

My Home

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My home is a condominium. It is purple. My condominium room number is 612 it is the largest number in our condominium complex. My home is near Yoshiduka station and there is a supermark...

My Mornings

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I have been following my morning routine for seven years. I follow my routine on weekdays and enjoy free time on weekends. I do eight things in my morning routine. I have to wake up early because ...

My Vacation

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during my summer vacation I went to Yamanasi. I went with my friend, my mom, my dad and my two dogs. we went by a car so my dad was very tired. we rented a big house with a hot tube, and it was on ...

B Describe This Picture #1

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When I first looked at this picture, I thought it was very beautiful because there were a lot of details and it had a wide variety of colours. This picture made me feel relaxed because in it, peopl...

B Last Weekend

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Last weekend I went to Tenjin to play with my friend. We gathered there at half past three so, it was a little late but we didn't mind. First, We took some pictures by using an application called s...

Last Weekend

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Last weekend I went to Tenjin to play with my friend. We gathered there at half past three so, it was a little late but we didn't mind. First, we took some pictures by using a phone application cal...

My Mornings

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My morning is busy and it often starts at 6:30am. My mother always makes my breakfast and lunch and wakes me up. I always eat and study for my school's morning test then leave home at 7:10. M...

My Room

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I like simple one, so my room has many white things : Walls, my desk, my chest, and my bed.And on my desk, there are only textbooks,a light, and some photos I took with my basketball club's member....

Let Me Introduce Myself...

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Hello! My name is Yuka Hara. I'm 16 years old and I have a little sister. I love my family.In middle school, I belonged to the basketball club. But there wasn't one in my high school, so I now belo...

My Home

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My home is a condominium. It is purple. My condominium room number is 612 it is the largest number in our condominium complex. My home is near Yoshiduka station and there is a supermark...

My Mornings

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I have been following my morning routine for seven years. I follow my routine on weekdays and enjoy free time on weekends. I do eight things in my morning routine. I have to wake up early because ...

My Vacation

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during my summer vacation I went to Yamanasi. I went with my friend, my mom, my dad and my two dogs. we went by a car so my dad was very tired. we rented a big house with a hot tube, and it was on ...

B Describe This Picture #1

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When I first looked at this picture, I thought it was very beautiful because there were a lot of details and it had a wide variety of colours. This picture made me feel relaxed because in it, peopl...

B Last Weekend

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Last weekend I went to Tenjin to play with my friend. We gathered there at half past three so, it was a little late but we didn't mind. First, We took some pictures by using an application called s...

Let Me Introduce Myself...

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My name is Haru Tsushima. I am 11 years old. I was born in Japan then, I went to america for my Dad's work. So I was there for three years and I and have learned lots of English and american cultur...

Family Fun

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I have two activities that I like to do with my family.First, I like playing video game such as Wii and competing whose win. Especially, my favorite game is Mario Karts. The rules of the game is ju...

I Want to Eat...

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My favorite restaurant is Afternoon Tea, a coffee shop in a department store near my house. They do not serve any expensive or unique meals, but I still love that restaurant and have been going t...

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My favorite restaurant is Afternoon Tea, a coffee shop in a department store near my house. It doesn't serve any expensive or unique meals, but I love that restaurant and have been visiting there t...

I Want to Eat...

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My favorite food is yakiniku. There is a restaurant chain I like called "Jojoenn" which serves yakiniku. They have many locations in Japan but I usually go to the restaurant in Kyoudou or Komazawa...

Favorite School Activities

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When I was in ninth grade, many activities were held in our school. For example, the school had field trips to go to Tokyo, watching Japanese classical drama-dance called kabuki, and many more. Fro...

A- Favorite School Activities

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When I was in the grade of nine, many school activities were held in our school. For example, going to field trip to Tokyo, watching Japanese classical drama-dance kabuki and some other more. From ...

I Want to Go...

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I have two places in the world where I want to go in the world.First, I want to go to Hawaii. When I was an elementary school student, I watched a TV program featuring Hawaii. When I was the beauti...

B Superpowers

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A superpower that I will want is a power that whatever I imagine, comes true. The reason is that I can make the world like everybody wants it to be. I can take surveys to people how the reasons t...

B My Favorite Place to Be

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My favorite place to be is my house because I feel very comfortable in the environment, I can watch my pets, and I have control over what I do. I feel satisfied especially in my room. The tempera...

B The Best Sport

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My favorite and best sport is basketball. I learned how to play it when I was younger, however, I officially started to play about two years ago. It all started when I joined the basketball club ...

Teacher Knows Best?

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From my experience, there are mainly two types of teachers. There are those who only care about their status, and there are those who actually care about their students and takes time to help. I ...

A- Teacher Knows Best?

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From my experience, there are mainly two types of teachers. One who only cares about their status, and another that actually cares about their students and takes time to help. I change my studyin...

B Teacher Knows Best?

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From my experience, there are mainly two types of teachers. One who only cares about their status, and another that actually cares about their students and takes time to help. I change my studying ...

Eating Out vs. Staying Home

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For the topic of eating out, or staying home to eat, I usually prefer staying home to eat. However, I sometimes prefer to eat out, on special occasions, or when I want something that cannot be m...

Hometowns

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My hometown, Culver City is a very comfortable place to live because it is not as urban as the metropolitan areas but is also not in the country side. However, it is not perfect, and if I could c...

A Hometowns

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My hometown, Culver City is a very comfortable place to live since it is not as urban as the metropolitan areas but also is not as suburban as the country sides. However, it is also not perfect a...

Museums

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Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Visitors do this to get the full experience of the place they are visiting by finding out the background of the area, exploring the uniqu...

A Museums

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Abundant of people visit museums when they travel to new places. Visitors do this to find out the general background of the place they are visiting, feel the unique culture of the region, and to ...

Attending University

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As Steve Jobs said at Stanford University in 2005 "Your time is limited, so don't waste it living someone else's life." Many students attend university to simply proceed on what they enjoy sinc...

A- Attending University

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As Steve Jobs said "Your time is limited, so don't waste it living someone else's life", many students attend universities to simply proceed on what they enjoy. This could be taking a higher le...