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A- The Best Book!

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I presume that there are exactly two distinct types of people, those who like to read and those who don't. I am the one who is reluctant to read books. I don't think it will count as a book categor...

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C+ My Mornings

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I hate waking up in the morning and I am always sleepy. My mother wakes me up every day at 6:25 however I show up in the kitchen about ten minutes after she wakes me up, that is because it tak...

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A- My Vacation

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I have already written about my last summer vacation in the United States in "My weekend", so I will write about my favorite summer homework. My favorite summer homework was "Make your original ...

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My Home

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My house is in Setagaya-ku Tokyo, Japan. I live in an apartment complex, which looks old from the outside but new from the inside. If you are looking for a house, live in our house. We live on the...

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Describe This Picture #1

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This picture shows people resting and playing in the pond bank. There are some people resting in the shadow of the trees, while some women use a parasol to protect themselves from the sun. There ...

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Last Weekend

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Last weekend was still in the middle of spring break, so I went to a ski camp in the Shigakougen neighborhood of Nagano City. I stayed there for three nights and four days which is neither too...

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Let Me Introduce Myself...

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Hey! My name is Ren Nakamura. I'm 18. I live in Fukuoka, Japan. I stayed in New Zealand for 10 months to study English. I was absent from school in Japan, so I have to take some classes once more. ...

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My Family

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My family memder is my mother my forther and my two dogs.My family is very fan and friendly.My mother's name is Eriko. She is very nice because she helps me with my jyuken and she saports me very m...

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Let Me Introduce Myself...

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My name is Asahi Iwama. I'm 18. I graduated from high school in Kanagawa, and I am now studying to enter university. I was born and lived for three years in Kochi. After that, I moved to Yokohama, ...

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C+ My Room

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I study in my room everyday, so many study's book is in there. My room use me and my mother. I like my room's layout. My room's door is brown, but it is broken, because I kicked with my foot. ...

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C+ My Mornings

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I hate waking up in the morning and I am always sleepy. My mother wakes me up every day at 6:25 however I show up in the kitchen about ten minutes after she wakes me up, that is because it tak...

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A- My Vacation

beginner

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I have already written about my last summer vacation in the United States in "My weekend", so I will write about my favorite summer homework. My favorite summer homework was "Make your original ...

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My Home

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My house is in Setagaya-ku Tokyo, Japan. I live in an apartment complex, which looks old from the outside but new from the inside. If you are looking for a house, live in our house. We live on the...

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Describe This Picture #1

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This picture shows people resting and playing in the pond bank. There are some people resting in the shadow of the trees, while some women use a parasol to protect themselves from the sun. There ...

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Last Weekend

beginner

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Last weekend was still in the middle of spring break, so I went to a ski camp in the Shigakougen neighborhood of Nagano City. I stayed there for three nights and four days which is neither too...

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Let Me Introduce Myself...

beginner

published

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Hey! My name is Ren Nakamura. I'm 18. I live in Fukuoka, Japan. I stayed in New Zealand for 10 months to study English. I was absent from school in Japan, so I have to take some classes once more. ...

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My Family

beginner

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My family memder is my mother my forther and my two dogs.My family is very fan and friendly.My mother's name is Eriko. She is very nice because she helps me with my jyuken and she saports me very m...

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Let Me Introduce Myself...

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My name is Asahi Iwama. I'm 18. I graduated from high school in Kanagawa, and I am now studying to enter university. I was born and lived for three years in Kochi. After that, I moved to Yokohama, ...

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C+ My Room

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I study in my room everyday, so many study's book is in there. My room use me and my mother. I like my room's layout. My room's door is brown, but it is broken, because I kicked with my foot. ...

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B Let Me Introduce Myself...

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My name is Ryotaro Kosugi. Because i was born in america, I also have an middle name, which is "Justin". I was born in forest hills, which is in New York. I lived there until I was 4, so I don't re...

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A- The Best Book!

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I presume that there are exactly two distinct types of people, those who like to read and those who don't. I am the one who is reluctant to read books. I don't think it will count as a book categor...

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The Best Book!

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My favorite books are part of the Warriors series. Almost 20 books have been published in the series. Just by seeing this title, I believe most people would presume a story of people fighting in w...

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Favorite School Activities

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My favorite school activity is the sports festival. I have two reasons for that. First, it is held in early June every year. Usually, other schools practice for the sports festival more than a wee...

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A- The Best Book!

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My favorite books are the part of The Warriors series. Almost 20 books have been published in the series. Just by seeing this title, I believe most people would presume a story of people fighting ...

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A- Favorite School Activities

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My favorite school activity is sports festival. I have two reasons for that. At first, it is held early June every year. Students cannot practice for school festival only a week. It is too short. ...

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A- The Best Book!

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I presume that there are exactly two distinct types of people, who like to read and who does't. I am the one who are reluctant to reading books. I don't think it will count as a book category howev...

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My Favorite Movie

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My favorite movie is Legally Blonde. I like this movie so much, I have seen it five times by now. I have three reasons for that.First of all, I love the main character of this movie. The main char...

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A My Best Friend

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I have many wonderful friends and it is difficult to choose one as the best friend. However, I can say that Rich is one of my best friends. We became good friends because we share a love for mounta...

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A- My Favorite Movie

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My favorite movie is Legally Blonde. I like this movie so much, I have seen it five times by now. I have three reasons for that.First of all, I love the main character of this movie. The main char...

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B I Want to Go...

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I love to travel to foreign countries. This is because there are many new discoveries and the different atmosphere makes me feel excited. Through traveling, it is able to accumulate precious exp...

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Museums

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When I visit some local museums in my hometown, it seems that the number of tourists who visit is increasing, as we have got growing number of tourists from around the world these days. This means ...

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Agree/Disagree: Responsibilities

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I do agree with the statement, "sometimes people should do things that they do not enjoy doing." However, that is only because the word "sometimes" is included in the statement. There are some si...

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Small Town vs. Big City

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There are only two types of people on this planet. People who prefer to live in a small town and people who prefer to live in a big city. I prefer to live in a small town because I am used to liv...

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A- Small Town vs. Big City

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There are only two types of people on this planet. People who prefer to live in a small town and people who prefer to live in a big city. I prefer to live in a small town. First of all, I have b...

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Attending University

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People attend college or university for many different reasons. But, I think that people attend them for three main reasons. First of all, they want to continue with education and attain a high...

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A- Attending University

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People attend college or university for many different reasons. But, I think that people attend them for three main reasons. First of all, they want to continue with education and go to a highe...

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Eating Out vs. Staying Home

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There are two utterly different ways of eating food. One way is to eat out at a restaurant or food stand, and the other is to eat at your own house. Out of these two options, I prefer eating at m...

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A Eating Out vs. Staying Home

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There are two utterly different ways of eating foods. One way is to eat out at a restaurants or food stands and the other is to eat out your own house. Out of these two options, I prefer eating a...

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Agree/Disagree: Parents as Teachers

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I do not agree with the statements that parents are the best teachers. The concept of teaching in Japan is relatively narrow just imparting the knowledge from teachers to students. As I am runn...

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C+ Serious vs. Light Movies

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There are two kind of movies in this world, one is designed to make the audiences think, and another one is designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie people prefer is that de...

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