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I am Yuri Asahina. I'm thirteen years old and in the second grade of junior high school. l'm a girl with short hair. Short hair is my favorite hairstyle because it's very easy to wash. I like black...

A My Home

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I live in a house in the countryside next to a mountain. It is not an exaggeration to say that my house is surrounded almost completely by nature. The house where I live has three characteristics. ...

A- My Favorite Class

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My favorite class is physical education, but my favorite subject is science. There are several reasons why. The reason why physical education is my favorite class, is because it is simply fun. The...

A My Family

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There are four people in my family: my father, mother, and sister, and me. First, I would like to talk to you about my father. He is 48 years old. He is a medicine researcher. He works hard e...

Watching Live vs. Watching at Home

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There are two ways in which one can be entertained. Those ways are actually being at the venue, or watching it on a television somewhere else. Although attending a live performance may be tiring ...

A My Family

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I have four family members. They are my mother, my father, my grandmother, and me. I'd like to write about my grandmother. My grandmother is ninety years old. She likes to go shopping, and she buy...

Last Weekend

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I belong to the chorus club.Last weekend, we had a stage of our school festival. We sang ten sings for about an hour! Our stage succeeded. After the school festival, our seniors had to retire of th...

My Mornings

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My morning starts at 6:20 and I wake up with an alarm everyday. I am busy every morning. Because I have low blood pressure, I am not good at waking up early. After I wake up I always have breakfast...

My Best Friend

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My best friends name is Carlos. He has been my new best friend since I moved to Malaysia from Japan 2 months ago. School just started in August, and I already got a best friend. He is in...

My Home

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I will introduce you to my home. My home is located in Fukuoka city. I live in an apartment building which has ten floors in total, and I live on the fifth floor. My family is made up of four peop...

A Let Me Introduce Myself...

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I am Yuri Asahina. I'm thirteen years old and in the second grade of junior high school. l'm a girl with short hair. Short hair is my favorite hairstyle because it's very easy to wash. I like black...

A My Home

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I live in a house in the countryside next to a mountain. It is not an exaggeration to say that my house is surrounded almost completely by nature. The house where I live has three characteristics. ...

A My Family

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There are four people in my family: my father, mother, and sister, and me. First, I would like to talk to you about my father. He is 48 years old. He is a medicine researcher. He works hard e...

A My Family

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I have four family members. They are my mother, my father, my grandmother, and me. I'd like to write about my grandmother. My grandmother is ninety years old. She likes to go shopping, and she buy...

Last Weekend

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I belong to the chorus club.Last weekend, we had a stage of our school festival. We sang ten sings for about an hour! Our stage succeeded. After the school festival, our seniors had to retire of th...

My Mornings

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My morning starts at 6:20 and I wake up with an alarm everyday. I am busy every morning. Because I have low blood pressure, I am not good at waking up early. After I wake up I always have breakfast...

My Home

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I will introduce you to my home. My home is located in Fukuoka city. I live in an apartment building which has ten floors in total, and I live on the fifth floor. My family is made up of four peop...

Describe a Family Member

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I have a very kind mom. She is from Kyoto. She is nice but sometimes scary. She prefers to stay indoors so she does not go outside that often. She loves expensive jewellery, and she wears very ...

B My Mornings

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My morning starts when I hear my father shouting at me from the kitchen. Next, I often stare at the lights for about a minute in the subtle room. When I shout back, my father stops shouting at me ...

My Family

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I am the oldest sister in my family. I have three brothers. My youngest brother, Kousuke, is five months old now. He is as loud as a dogs barks. He screams and cries, but when he laughs, he ...

A- My Favorite Class

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My favorite class is physical education, but my favorite subject is science. There are several reasons why. The reason why physical education is my favorite class, is because it is simply fun. The...

My Best Friend

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My best friends name is Carlos. He has been my new best friend since I moved to Malaysia from Japan 2 months ago. School just started in August, and I already got a best friend. He is in...

B My Favorite Place to Be

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I do not have a place to visit often because I always being same place such as my school, cram school, and Starbucks. I have a university entrance examination year after next and I have to study a...

My Getaway

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I like to go out and study with my friends. I am in the 12th grade. In other words, I am going to take entrance examinations for universities which I want to go. So, I have to study harder even o...

A- My Best Friend

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My best friend is Angus Matthews. Everything about him makes him the best friend! He has been with me since pre-school. He is the type of person who can that make your day better: he's funny, int...

A My Best Friend

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My best friend's name is Aoi. Aoi and I became friends last year. Some people may think that one year is a short amount of time to become a best friends, but we became best friends because we've so...

A- I Want to Eat...

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My favorite food is Japanese pork cutlet. In Japan, Japanese pork cutlet is called tonkatsu. I love tonkatsu very much, and I think I am the one who loves it the most in the world. In particular, ...

A- My Best Friend

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I don't have a "best" friend. In fact, almost everyone in my class is my friend; here, I will introduce one of my friends named Kanato. Kanato is very good at sports, especially running. He is o...

My Favorite Teacher

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My favorite teacher is Hana Suzuki. She is my cram school teacher. I have been going to an English cram school since last year, and she has been teaching me since the beginning. There's a number o...

My Favorite Place to Be

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My favorite place to be is Frost Valley YMCA in the United States. Of course, I cannot go there too many times, because of the long distance. However, once a person goes there, he or she will lov...

Watching Live vs. Watching at Home

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There are two ways in which one can be entertained. Those ways are actually being at the venue, or watching it on a television somewhere else. Although attending a live performance may be tiring ...

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There are two types of way one can be entertained. That is actually being at the venue or watching it on a television somewhere else. Although attending a live performance may be tiring for some ...

Important Skills

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There are many skills which are essential to be successful, but I have learned through experience that the most important one is the skill of communication. To be successful, you definitely need ...

A- Important Skills

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There are many skills which are essential to be successful, but I have learned through experience that the most important is the skill of communication. To be successful, you definitely need more...

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There are many skills in which are essential to be successful, but I have learned through experience that the most important one out of it is the skill of communication. To be successful, you def...

A- Attending University

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Why people attend college? Most colleges take us to have four years of time and plenty of investment for tuition to get the degree. What would the students get from college and university in return...

Highways vs. Public Transportation

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When I think about transportation, I prefer to be driven in my own car to be secluded from the public so that I don't have to care about troubling strangers. But I also think that if everyone use...

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When I think about transportation, I prefer to be driven on my own car since I am secluded from the public so I don't have to care about troubling strangers. But I also think that if everyone use...

Agree/Disagree: Public Figures

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Recently, I have been growing more and more upset about how media makes coverages. They stalk famous people in search of content that would give them the most profit. Some attention to these peop...

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Recently, I have been growing more and more upset about how medias make coverages. They stalk famous people in search of content that would give them the most profit. Some attention to these peop...